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Culture smart or Science Intelligent?(10月14日参考阅读)  

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 2009年CCTV杯全国大学生英语演讲比赛全部资料,请点击阅读:

【震撼】2006-2009演讲比赛优秀演讲稿展播

 

Culture Smart or Science Intelligent? (10月19日参考阅读)

 

第十四届21世纪联想杯决赛优秀讲稿点评

 21世纪英语演讲比赛即兴演讲遵循的原则

21世纪-联想杯全国大学生英语演讲比赛(决赛视频)       

2008年CCTV杯全国大学英语演讲比赛决赛动人故事(视频)

即兴演讲写作的解题思路(重要)

2009英语即兴演讲比赛环节模板 

Culture smart or Science Intelligent?(10月12日更新参考阅读) 

 关于稿件中名人名言和标题的使用:我们所收集的材料里面,尤其是暑假276份材料和思路里面260份是没有名人名言的,网友和赛友均提出来各自的理由:

 1.  名人名言所占字数比例太多,整个篇幅貌似被名人所占据,把自己的观点给削弱了,让人听起来有些空洞;

2.  不容易说明问题,特别是名人名言部分容易成为整篇稿子的漏洞,让提问官击破。

3.  很多名言貌似恰当,但实际上和主题无关,很可能成为笑料,当然评委是这样看待的;

4.  稿子里面不能没有标题,绝对不能没有;

  请各位网友、博友、赛友将自己的稿件题目写在博客下方的留言板上,然后大家来讨论;下面就一篇比较Fresh的稿子进行简单讲解,以便给大家提供一些参考: 

 暑假博友发来的稿子的共同点:

1. 出发点就在思路上定位为作出某些选择方法,解释这些方法,达到目的;演讲就是要说出自己的观点基础上说服别人,不在乎你把两者堪称统一体还是分别看待,关键你要以理服人;

2.突出个人经历和感受,(这得益于暑假我们在这里大量讲解2008-2009重大演讲比赛冠军稿件的写作思路)

  2009年21世纪联想杯冠军清华大学金璐的稿子对大家启发最大,请看博客里面文章,这里我们展示前三段;

What would you do if you had only one day left to live?

“What would you do if you had only one day left to live?”

I asked this question to my young students when teaching English this winter. What were their answers?

“I would watch television!” the first answer. “I would play with the computer!” the second one. “I would play with computer TOO.” The girl finished her sentence perfectly with a serious smile. Indeed how cute and innocent that smile was, but how seriously my heart was hurt. I was too frightened to listen to more answers like that.

Ten years ago, at their age, I had a different answer: I would spend the last day of my life gazing at the face of my dear grandmother until I inscribed every detail of it onto my mind.

 3. 从七月初到现在收集的稿子没有看到诸如:without culture, there will be no science 这类空话;基本上都在现实中发掘了题材,然后演绎这个故事、经历;一个好的演讲只有个人经历为主线的时候才最具有说服力(convincing),不然你哪来的感受呀?没有感受你怎么说服人呀?在Accepting ourselves这篇稿子里,作者用了大量的事实来说明,这个世界就根本没有聪明和愚蠢之分,只要我们接受自己,沿着自己的道路走下去,我们就是聪明的,片中从他成长的经历谈起,根本没有提及culture or science? 请看:

 I experienced my childhood in which the words smart and intelligent were used to praise me —I were smart if I did what I were told. This kind of discipline undermines my ability to find own moral center and to trust my own inner self.

4. Music or Music Player? 两者都不能缺少来引申题目中文化和科学是统一体;

5. 稿子里没有science and technology并列;

6. 问观众一个挑战性的问题;目的是增加互动效果这是我们最成功的一点

 

2008年CCTV杯全国大学生英语演讲比赛全国总决赛前六名:

冠军: 施宇鹏   复旦大学    生物工程

亚军   张瑞婷   西南交通大学     建筑工程

季军    柴逸飞  北京科技大学    机械制造

4.    杨啸寒    武汉大学        历史专业  

5.    俞宏晋   电子科技大学     电子信息工程        

6.    徐楚     上海交通大学      管理学院

 11日新收集到的题目,请赛友将自己的题目发到englishspeech@yeah.net,我们在一起交流;暑假到现在共收集了267个不同的题目,谢谢各位网友和赛友的鼎力支持:

Judgment Versus Opinion  (判断与观点,文化和科学没有取舍)

The Gift of Our Talent (我们能力带来的惊喜,)

I am simply myself  (不要失去自我)

Following Up my own directions (永远不改变方向)

Add, not to divide (从乔姆斯基由数学家变成伟大的语言学家联想)

Finding my own Path (数学推理与英语翻译)

If we would never have had computers ? (如果有一天计算机消失了,父子俩坐在一起品茶和读书的感觉)

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Think before we act (三思而行) 

If I would choose again (选择志愿不要忘记自己的乐趣)

Beyond my goals  (目标之外的联想,真确的方法和理念才能达到目标)

Being an innovator rather than an inventor  (居家节能之见解,不去发明而是去改造)

Never Ignore my instinctive (相信自己,一个化工专业的同学发现自己真正喜欢的是绘画)

Guitar and Geometry (弹吉他学几何 )Why Do I love Flight Simulator? (我为什么喜欢飞行模拟器?)

If I were a movie producer? (假如我是一个制片?)Back to the future (回到未来)

From a million to a billion (数字看文字)From mystery to mastery  (从幼稚到成熟) 

When we believe it (当我们真正相信的时候,天外来客对我们科学和文化的影响)doing our best work (精力而为)

We are decison makers  (我们是真正的决策者)Carbon 14 (为什么考古要用碳14?)

Acceptance As Giving (汉语题目未收到)If I designed the Water Cubic (如果我来设计水立方) 

Put my feet in others' Shoes (为别人)Seeing is not believing (大学实践课堂的疑惑)

They are still flying (怀特兄弟精神永在)Following the  direction (永不迷失方向)

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从2009年21世纪联想杯全国冠军金路的稿子看写作思路

 What would you do if you had only one day left to live?

(题目设计冲击力强,观众带着问题从演讲当中获得答案)

“What would you do if you had only one day left to live?”

I asked this question to my young students when teaching English this winter. What were their answers?

(个人的经历是一篇成功演讲稿必不可少的,没有,你的说服力就会有折扣,观众不是来听你解释什么是culture smart or science intelligent,他们是想听你如何用自己的经历来演绎这个题目)

“I would watch television!” the first answer. “I would play with the computer!” the second one. “I would play with computer TOO.” The girl finished her sentence perfectly with a serious smile. Indeed how cute and innocent that smile was, but how seriously my heart was hurt. I was too frightened to listen to more answers like that.

(开始对比,引出推理和解释,这个but 用的恰到好处,而且使用的修辞手法,how cute 和 how seriously 平型)

Ten years ago, at their age, I had a different answer: I would spend the last day of my life gazing at the face of my dear grandmother until I inscribed every detail of it onto my mind.

(继续讲故事,对比的手法,different,夹带了虚拟语气,和题目相符;选择my dear grandmother更容易体现亲情,而且这是在生命的最后一天,)

When grandmother was getting old and weak, my family bought her a telephone so I could save time and the trouble of traveling to her home by making phone calls instead. Later we bought her a television so she could watch modern dramas by herself. Then grandma must have been, we assumed, very contented and happy.

(故事没有完成,观众仍然等结论,用by making phone calls instead来说明技术带来的人情的冷漠)

But I never really knew how grandma felt. She silently passed away without a word one night. When I heard about her death, a chilling pain pierced my empty heart. The pain grew even sharper as I tried to remember in detail exactly how grandma looked and I failed completely! How could I remember? I had not visited her for ages—it seemed like a century! My memories of her dissolved into thin air and leaked away like water.

(继续讲故事,谈感受,里面修辞博多:it seemed like a century(夸张)pierced my empty heart/ How could I remember?(反问)/ dissolved into thin air and leaked away like water.(比喻))

Even though I have a telephone, can she hear me now?

Even though I might be on television, can she see me now?

Even though I have modern telecommunications, can she still communicate with me now?

With all these “tele”s, I was powerless.

(三个大排比,又是排比问句,凸现她的修辞功底,而且对于问句,她给出了答案,With all these “tele”s, I was powerless.)

Don’t people just love the word of “tele”, which means far away. Indeed this is how modern technology has changed our world. But please don’t forget this other word with “tele”: telepathy: which refers to human beings’ inborn ability to connect to our loved ones. Our minds are supposed to read each other’s minds; our hearts are supposed to feel each other’s hearts — and fulfill these without any forms of tool!

(这段似乎有写空洞,但是它是建立在上面个人感受的基础上的,而且用词的准确到了极致,Our minds are supposed to read each other’s minds; our hearts are supposed to feel each other’s hearts )

But the moment I desperately struggled to remember grandmother’s face, the telepathy between her and me had shut down forever. With the help of modern technology, I killed our telepathy.

(逐渐导入结论部分,用词恰当desperately struggled/ shut down forever/ I killed our telepathy)

This shall never happen again! The “tele”s are great inventions. But “telepathy” gives them the warmth of a human face. Let’s harness the power of television to excite our kids to develop their telepathy with nature… so that they can read the secret language of flowers. Let’s make the telephone lines provoke us to preserve our telepathy with each other, so we can connect in a warm and feeling way. Let technology keep our “telepathy” ALIVE! We need to wake up and make this happen.

( 继续推理演绎,最后感召句运用的惟妙惟肖/ Let technology keep our “telepathy” ALIVE!)

I told my grandma’s story to those young kids that day. They got very quiet. They asked me for a second chance to answer the question. They had come to a new understanding – that very moment they had made to me and to our future together, a dear promise.

(好的演讲稿件都是首尾呼应,继续讲故事,映出结论)

The Truths Within

Value Your Own Wisdom

Throughout our lives, we will encounter individuals who presume to know what is best for us. The insights they offer cannot compare, however, with the powers of awareness and discernment within us. From birth we are blessed with wisdom that cannot be learned or unlearned. It exists whether or not we acknowledge it because it is a gift given to us by a loving universe before we chose to experience existence on the earthly plane. Yet for all its permanence, it is vital that we value and honor this incredible element of the self. It is when we do not use our inborn wisdom that we begin to doubt our personal truths and are driven to outside sources of information because we are afraid. What we know to be true in our hearts is invariably true, and we discover how intensely beautiful and useful self-trust can be when we recognize the power of our wisdom.

Inner wisdom is not subject to the influences of the outside world, which means that it will never demand that we surrender our free will or counsel us to act in opposition to our values. We benefit from this inspiration when we open ourselves to it, letting go of the false notion that we are less qualified than others to determine our fate. The wisdom inside of us is the source of our discernment and our ability to identify blessings in disguise. When we are unsure of who to trust, how to respond, or what we require, the answers lie in our inner wisdom. It knows where we are going and understands where we are coming from; taking this into account though it is not a product of experience but rather a piece of our connection to the universal mind.

In the whole of your existence, no force you will ever encounter will contribute as much to your ability to do what you need to do and be who you want to be as your natural wisdom. Through it, you reveal your growing consciousness to the greater source and discover the true extent of your strength. If you heed this wisdom with conviction and confidence, the patterns, people, and fears that held you back will be dismantled, paving the way for you to fulfill your truest potential.

 

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